Lordtedo's #4

Legend tells of a place. A place inhabited by friendly people. People in search of a treasure. treasure to a future. A future with so much more instor. Legend tells of a young man. This young man was breave, strong, and most of all smart. Legend says this man was an adventurer who disscovered great and powerful things. Legends say this man unlocked this future and he was the greatest man alive. Legends say alot. Are you ready to tell your story. Become that legend.

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Please don't read and not comment. I know you Wana say something. Were all friends here. Go ahead and comment. Just let it out. Don't be shy now. Don't worry, I'll understand. You don't want to have wasted all this time not to reply. Say it and be free! If you don't say it we will never know. If you don't want to waste any more time then just comment. If you gona comment you don't have to read this. Have you commented yet? Don't be haten it just be sayin it. You will feel so much better once you let is out.

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