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Fire2367

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Post Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:24 am

haypi prologue

there was a young boy in a little town. who thought he would never do anything important till a group of pirates came and burnt down the village down to the ground and killed his parents. the pirates took the boy hostage and raised him to be like them. when the boy turned 18 he wanted to get treasure to start his own kingdom so when everybody was asleep he stole a treasure map that told of eight priceless relics and stole just enough gold to buy a cheap ship with a small submarine to go to the places that the map told of. And the brave man started his adventure that will be told for generations.
Last edited by Fire2367 on Thu Jan 06, 2011 12:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fire2367

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Post Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:25 am

Re: haypi prologue

Please rate 1-10 sorry about grammar
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Foreigner

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Post Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:47 am

Re: haypi prologue

7 I'd say. It lacks detail, but is a great start.
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Fire2367

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Post Thu Jan 06, 2011 11:34 am

lRe: haypi prologue

Thanks ill work on that
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Fire2367

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Post Thu Jan 06, 2011 12:15 pm

Re: haypi prologue

I changed it is that better

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