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Armyoftwo

Beginner

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Joined: Tue Jun 22, 2010 12:41 am

Post Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:46 pm

Prowlers

hello im the leader of Prowleres a new alliance we accept all lvl of members and are ranked 39 with 19 members.


heres a few of our ads

It was a dark night a list mist covered the land that you govern, while preparing for sleep you hear an creaking sound come from your office, you grab your sword and rush into the office. There in the middle of the office is a hooded figure, then in the blink of an eye he has disarmed you and knocked you unconscious...You awake the next morning and inspect your home thinking this hooded figure was but a mere thief, there on your desk lays a single sheet of paper on it there are 2 words "Join Prowlers"

You are walking in the busy market of a city when a figure catches your attention, a Hooded Figure he motions for you to follow and he ducks into a dark back ally, when you reach the ally he is gone all that remains is a is a tablet, On the tablet there are 2 words "Join Prowlers"
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Raymund

Newbie

Posts: 2

Joined: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:33 am

Post Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:26 pm

Re: Prowlers

Two suggestions.

1. Spell your alliance name correctly ;)

"Prowlers"

2. Include some substance in you ad that explains aspects and benefits of your alliance instead of creating a weird little story.

Good luck
and try not to disband in 3 days again ;)
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Armyoftwo

Beginner

Posts: 43

Joined: Tue Jun 22, 2010 12:41 am

Post Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:26 am

Re: Prowlers

one thats how you spell in straight out of a dictionary

two it seems to be effective i like to be creative i could emoji spam,this is just a fun read for people and theyt seem to like it.
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Raymund

Newbie

Posts: 2

Joined: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:33 am

Post Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:10 pm

Re: Prowlers

Doesn't matter. You spelled them two different ways. You need to be consistent.

Creative or not, it serves as spam because it doesn't have any true value.
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Caladan

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Joined: Wed May 12, 2010 6:34 pm

Location: At, or nowhere near my computer

Post Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:21 pm

Re: Prowlers

I, for one, enjoy reading ads like this, as opposed to the "we are helpful, emoji, give you treasures, emoji, ranked whatever, emoji, allied to whoever, emojimojimoji" type ads. Besides it gives you an insight to what the leader is like. I do recommend changing the story up as much as you can though. No one likes repeat ads.
Beware the Artesians!!

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