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Shadetale

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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:26 pm

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I want to have my opinion. That is my opinion.
You use the same AA BB CC format for every poem which is rather repetitive.
You could expand your vocabulary a bit too...thesaurus might help
You can't expect to only have raving reviews when you post something in the public
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:27 pm

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I should sue lol :P
You know you like OUTLANDERS. Love is like a flower, after a while, it dies.
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:27 pm

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u arent getting posts added to ur post count for these forums: off topic, nomination, reflection
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:28 pm

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You are the only one I can't expect raving reviews from shade.
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:29 pm

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lol when im writing poems they are abab or abcbcba or like this... (dont expect im writing poems in english ;)
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:31 pm

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Shade, were talking about these poems if they are good. Not if they are great compared to some expert.. maybe
"Never give up"

oh, this times are hard, there making us crazy, don't give up on me baby.

http://www.haypi.com/forum/viewtopic.ph ... 783#p83783 Check it out and give me feedback.
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:32 pm

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Because I give my honest opinion?
If you expect people to criteic your work, you have to have an open mind when they tell you what they think. If you can't listen to even me, your not going to do well when other people aren't as nice as I'm being


Uranos, there's also limericks, haikus, free verse and so many more too
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:33 pm

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It's cool, but don't freaking change my poll!!! geez jerk.

their are tons of different kinds, and boy do I hate them in school.
"Never give up"

oh, this times are hard, there making us crazy, don't give up on me baby.

http://www.haypi.com/forum/viewtopic.ph ... 783#p83783 Check it out and give me feedback.
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:33 pm

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They aren't like proffesional or anything but they are pretty good.
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Post Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:35 pm

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Well not my fault you weren't giving everyone free will.
I'm going to stop posting now as I'm only getting bashed for my opinion :/
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