Schelanpup's Haypi Adventure Prologue Entry

The setting of the point and time of this prologue is after the great war an self-destruction of the Haypi Kongdom lands. A war broke out in which every general was for themselves. Some treaties were formed, but like most, they were eventually broken. Some died off, some survived, and some flourished. But the blood stained lands were too barren survival was impossible for long, even for those who had abundant resources. 

There was only one last hope. The seas and oceans. The war rages long there, too. Many valuable ships are destroys and have sunk to the bottom of the bodies of water. All of the peoples' materials... Gone.

Even though many generals were left alone long enough to build equipment to adapt, the war still rages on. It's a little more controlled, and alliances of reformed. To help rebuild the land and flourish again, they are forced to explore the bottoms of the waters and scavenge treasure off of the wreckage of the warships. They can then organize trades over a safe tradeport system.

However, these resources and treasures have caused jealousy and envy causing wars to break out. Not much can be done about this, and not much will be done because of the benefits to some generals and alliances.

If I could get some feedback, that would be awesome...

It makes some sense, but you make no mention of the 8 relics, which is what the game seems to be based around, also you do not mention the ship or sub at all, also, mentioning HAypi Kingdom may not make much sense to newcomers who didnt play Haypi Kingdom , overall i give it a 6.5 out of 10

Okay. I'm working on another one right now, and it will include that. I wrote this to get my muse going.