Sat Jan 15, 2011 3:37 pm
Solong 5th entry
He lived in a brilliant kingdom filled with happiness and joy, but unfortunately for this one man, he was the poorest man of all. He had spent his life in and out of prison because in his eyes, at least they gave him food and a place to sleep. He was a notorious thief and beggar which made him the most hated man in town. But one day, while trying to steal from the most beautiful woman in town, he was caught red-handed. The lady decided that instead of turning him in to the authorities, she would give him a chance to prove himself. Both of them for some reason, fell in love and understood each other. After 3 years of secretly being together, the king found out and was furious, how could a beggar be with the most beautiful woman in my kingdom?
And so he planned out a scheme that would be the end of the beggar. On the very next day, after the beggar had taken a nap on the cold, hard ground, six of the kings men knocked the beggar unconscious with the butt of their sword. They then carried the beggar on a 9 mile hike to the other side of the mountain, the home of the evil sorcerer. The six servants begged dearly for the sorcerer to spare them and to send this beggar into the unforgiving past. The sorcerer did just that, but in living up to his reputation, he sent them all back to the past with the beggar. They awoke on the beach, covered in salt water and sand. As soon as they woke up, they ran away from the slowly waking beggar. When the beggar finally woke, he was dizzy and confused. He decided to go to the love of his life to sort things out, but when he knocked on the door, it was answered by an 11 year old girl who screamed and slammed the door shut. The beggar cried deeply as he walked into town, where a poster on a shop wall caught his eye. He walked closer to the shop and read the sign. It told him of eight ancient relics that were scattered among the seas many years ago. And whoever finds them, would receive a "key to the future". The beggar cried out with joy but unfortunately, that was heard by the unlucky servants and they read the poster after he left. After just a month of stealing, the beggar could afford a ship and a submarine, not in great shape, but ships nonetheless. Now it is a race against time and the servants to find those relics and unlock the key to find the love of his life once again!
----------------------------------------------------------
It would be kinda hard to make this not sexist but it can be done. Please give feedback and rate x/10. Thanks!
And so he planned out a scheme that would be the end of the beggar. On the very next day, after the beggar had taken a nap on the cold, hard ground, six of the kings men knocked the beggar unconscious with the butt of their sword. They then carried the beggar on a 9 mile hike to the other side of the mountain, the home of the evil sorcerer. The six servants begged dearly for the sorcerer to spare them and to send this beggar into the unforgiving past. The sorcerer did just that, but in living up to his reputation, he sent them all back to the past with the beggar. They awoke on the beach, covered in salt water and sand. As soon as they woke up, they ran away from the slowly waking beggar. When the beggar finally woke, he was dizzy and confused. He decided to go to the love of his life to sort things out, but when he knocked on the door, it was answered by an 11 year old girl who screamed and slammed the door shut. The beggar cried deeply as he walked into town, where a poster on a shop wall caught his eye. He walked closer to the shop and read the sign. It told him of eight ancient relics that were scattered among the seas many years ago. And whoever finds them, would receive a "key to the future". The beggar cried out with joy but unfortunately, that was heard by the unlucky servants and they read the poster after he left. After just a month of stealing, the beggar could afford a ship and a submarine, not in great shape, but ships nonetheless. Now it is a race against time and the servants to find those relics and unlock the key to find the love of his life once again!
----------------------------------------------------------
It would be kinda hard to make this not sexist but it can be done. Please give feedback and rate x/10. Thanks!
