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VendettaE

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Post Sat Jan 22, 2011 8:02 pm

Prologue Competition (feedback please)

In the beginning… the earth was without form and void. As the world began taking shape humanity endured harsh cataclysmic events…volcanic eruptions of grave proportions, earthquakes shifting terrains apart, meteor storms that destroyed civilizations… yet humanity always survived… Now a new phenomenon sweeps across the planet… Lightening and thunder plague the earth, rapid winds cause hurricanes and tornadoes, cumulonimbus clouds have covered the sunlight, and a catastrophic storm floods the earth. Only a few desolate pieces of land are left and humankind has moved to navigating the seas. All the resources are now on the seabed covered with hundreds of feet, and sometimes miles of water. The only hope for survival is in a myth… a folk tale that speaks of eight mystical relics that have extraordinary powers. The combination of all eight will take you to a better time, a better world, or so the myth says. No one really knows what adventure lies after all relics are together, yet YOU are among the survivors that are tired, hungry, and after the relics. Hope for good sailing as you seek the eight relics in the midst of unmerciful brutes.
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Post Sat Jan 22, 2011 8:46 pm

Re: Prologue Competition (feedback please)

thats a pretty good prologue. i think it talks about the beggining a lot, but i like how you tied it together.
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Post Sat Jan 22, 2011 8:56 pm

Re: Prologue Competition (feedback please)

Yodac wrote:thats a pretty good prologue. i think it talks about the beggining a lot, but i like how you tied it together.


Appreciate the response!

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